Some people think that it is a good idea of all employees to wear uniform at work. To what extent so you agree or disagree.
Some people reason that the decision for all staff to wear the same colour and pattern of cloth to work is a welcomed idea. If those working in a firm put on a uniform attire ,they can be easily identify and the rate at which fraudsters deceived customers will reduce.
Employees, people who are employed to work in a firm, should wear a uniform attire to distinguished them from non staff. Since this similar colour and design of cloth, are only wore by staff, customers will know the right person to approach and discuss about items for purchase. Although l went to a bookshop, l couldn't decision on the particular novel to buy. A young man ,who was handsome and tall , walked up to me and he asked about the type of books l wanted. Despite he was well groomed, l refused to continued discussing with him because his attire was different from that of other staff in the bookshop, Well , l was later informed that he works in the shop. Therefore, uniform wore by workers help customers to easily identify them.
Furthermore, uniform outfit wore by employees will cut down on the rate at which customers are deceived by fraudsters. Customers will only approach individuals who wore a firm's uniform for details and payments on an item to be purchase. Therefore , buyers will not pay money to a non staff in a company. The Nigerian police reported about an incidence that occurred in a Supermarket where staffs wear any type of clothing to work. A woman wanted to buy an electronic device from this supearker. Since the workers are difficult to identify , she asked a guy directly by her about the item
After much persuasion by him , she bought the device. Unfortunately, she paid directly into the man's account because she felt he was a staff in the supermarket. The security personnel refused her from leaving the premises with the device since she couldn't provide a receipt to prove she had paid for the item .He played a fast one on her.
If members of an organisation wear uniform to work, their patronisers can distinguish them from others and they will rarely make pay for a purchased item to a non staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67560321716 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60863195323 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512064343164 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4265994908 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130757445628 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485570670495 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644286384974 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922019530848 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745322994977 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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