Some people say it is a good idea for all employees to wear a uniform at work.
A certain school of thought are of the opinion that workers should make use of uniform in their workplace. I strongly disagree with this view and the reasons for this will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, the use of specific attires rob people of some certain religion and culture their acceptable dress codes. In other words, adherents of some religion and cultures are expected to dress in certain ways which may not be compliant with certain uniforms. For example, an Hindu woman typically wear long robes which is quite different to most uniform types of overalls and trousers. Another example are the Muslims who prefer to wear certain outfit on Friday for their weekly rituals.
Secondly, uniforms are not suitable for some industries . Certain jobs like banking, consulting and farming require different outfits for different task. Limiting the employees to a certain attire is not advisable. For instance, a farmer worker requires different outfit for meetings, planting, animal husbandry and irrigation. In this cases it inappropriate to restrict workers to a particular attire.
Finally, the use of uniform adds to the financial burdens of the company. Uniforms are most times bespoke and not off the shelf and this increases their costs. These costs are typically borne by the company. An example is the high cost of hiring garment factories in Nigeria for tailor-made dresses. These costs could be avoidable by the companies if they do away with uniforms.
In conclusion, the demerits of making use of uniforms which include non compliance with certain religion, suitability in certain jobs and cost implication have been discussed in detail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25842696629 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64814986462 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9439074498 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167975966904 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590109691165 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514564237348 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879639330489 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047594179848 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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