Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss two views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that solving puzzles and reading books in spare time sharpens the mind while others opine that resting is advantageous. However, I believe that occupying the mind with reading and playing puzzle games is helpful because it makes a person capable of handling critical situations easily.
On the one hand, reading provides us knowledge and word puzzle improves our thought process. Performing such activities is quite similar to the physical exercise works to strengthen the body muscles. So, it is a method used for brain exercise which helps to enhance certain parts of the brain. Someone who utilizes his recreational time by reading or solving puzzles outperform the one who does not. For example, software programmers at Google are known as the fastest to solve any sort of programming issues. This is because Google provides books, magazines, and puzzles to the employees to spend their leisure time.
On the other hand, resting and relaxing is necessary because it is stress relieving. People often seem to be tired or in stress because of their hectic work schedules or tasks. So, having a quick nap or looking at a beautiful view of nature from the balcony in a free time helps to relax. It refreshes and recharges the mind to continue for the rest of the day, like a fresh start. To illustrate, a report by world economic forum in Japan doctors advice patients to walk in the forest to get rid of stress and depression.
To conclude, it is irrefutable that reading and performing puzzle games enhances the ability of problem solving and creative thinking. Whereas, resting the mind is a dose of stress buster medicine. I think that reading and playing puzzle games are more beneficial for improving the mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... problem solving and creative thinking. Whereas, resting the mind is a dose of stress b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, for example, i think, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94863013699 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58253467801 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.701261987 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295580071086 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868534306733 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598162255411 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168346488537 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305693699798 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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