Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the advantage of playing sport are more in a group or in their individual. In this essay, I will discuss this two sides of view and conclude with my personal opinion.
First of all, playing a sport within a team can achieve the best result and support each team members. This means a group of people try to do their best on the competition because of the same goal, it gathered people to be together and build a strong relationship. In addition, a sport team have more chance to share their trouble of playing sport with other players and the problem might be solved easier than individual sports. For example, football is a sport that need lots of people to deliver a ball by team’s cooperation and make the game successful. As well as, to analysis the weakness and strength of each players and put them in different positions which is a way to overcome some people’s weakness.
On the other hand, individual sports can be more freedom which means the person can make whatever effort as they want and there is no any team members to be concerned about. However, it can be stressful for someone who play individual sports. It gathered spotlight on only one person and the player needs to face the situation alone if they lose the game. For instance, people who swim can achieve the final result by individual training but they might feel more frustrated than team sport players as they practice by them self without group support.
In conclusion, every sport has its positive and negative sides. However, I believe the benefits of group sports outweigh individual plays as I think a team can build a strong power.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... two sides of view and conclude with my personal opinion. First of all, playing a sport withi...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...atever effort as they want and there is no any team members to be concerned about....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71972318339 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53267342803 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.244371873 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266268296942 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998144306679 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612402587713 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17048117241 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200762704941 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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