Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Certain individuals have an opinion that managers are solely responsible for taking decision in organisation, whereas, others opine that employees should participate in the decision-making process. In this essay we will discuss both the vies and, in my opinion, I do believe that employees views and ideas should be considered while taking decisions for the organisation.
Some people believe that managers of the organisations have the authority to take the crucial decisions and employees should not be consulted. They believe that sharing critical data and information with employees will increase the chances of security risks. The employees might use the sensitive and crucial data of the organisation for their own personal gains. Moreover, employees participating in the decision-making sharing innumerable ideas and values might lead confusion, conflicts and ambiguity in the workplace which will not only lead to delay in making decisions but will also create circumstances where employees feel disconnected and confused with their work
However, despite of few disadvantages of employee participation, I believe that the merits of including employees in decision making far outweighs the demerits. Companies will become more creative and innovation with the ideas of employees, which are the two essential elements for sustain a business. Employees are in constant contact with the market and customers and thus they will be able to provide with inventive and visionary proposals which will help in growth. Furthermore, mutual understanding, faith and corporation between employees and companies will be stronger, they will feel a part of the organisation and thus will be motivated to work with more enthusiasm towards achieving the company’s and personal goals.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that employees should be invited to take decisions as this will bring harmony in work place and employees will work with more commitment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6406779661 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11627765783 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.480490736 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.4 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254187341203 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122537411273 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100162055293 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186283191949 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997691428896 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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