Some people think that private health care is better for people. Other say that health care should be free of charge and run by the government.How far do you agree or disagree with the given statement?

Essay topics:

Some people think that private health care is better for people. Other say that health care should be free of charge and run by the government.
How far do you agree or disagree with the given statement?

In the contemporary world health care sector is mushrooming day by day. Some folks hold a view that private health care services are more suitable for the populace, while the rest contradicts it and think that it is the duty of governments to provide these types of medical services free of cost. I will go with the latter view point and some reasons behind it will be discussed in the coming paragraphs.

Firstly, nationalists are the assets of that nation as they contribute for its development. So it is the mere responsibility of regimes to take care of the health issues of their people. Moreover, governments has a huge machinery to run these services throughout the country, operation cost of which could be incurred from revenues generated by the country. For instance, in all the developed countries, like Canada, all the medical services are provided free of cost to its citizens. They believe that if people will remain healthy they can do more work which will add to their economy. Therefore, it becomes the duty of regimes to provide health care services free of cost to their people as they are the assets of the nation.

On contrary, sometimes in the developing nations and the under developed countries the situations are not favorable to provide these medical services by the governments. The public hospitals in such cases are not equipped with the latest machines and some major emergency equipment's. Therefore, there can be risk of someone's life. In such conditions private health care services can act as a boon to people.

In short, it is reiterated that it is the mere responsibility of the governments to provide free medical services to their people's as they are the assets of the nation.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92783505155 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77494334669 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474226804124 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.528299486 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232836292442 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871851258704 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648389661247 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142440520841 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063148690235 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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