You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to join because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer:Explain your situationDescribe your problemTell him/her when you can start

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to join because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer:
Explain your situation
Describe your problem
Tell him/her when you can start

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that it would not be possible for me to join next week, as an assistant professor in your renowned institute.

I am glad to hear that I got selected to serve your college from among several other qualified candidates. it would be convenient for me to daily travel to my place if I join in your college, which otherwise do not happen when working in other city, as it is the only college offering Engineering course in our city.

According to the terms and conditions of my present job, I am obliged to give three-month notice before resigning from the post and the joining on the new position offered by you is due next week. Therefore, being a loyal employee, I could not resign from my position immediately.

if it does not affect your work, please allow me to join at this position after three months.

I look forward for consideration of my request.

Yours faithfully,

John Smith

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...resign from my position immediately. if it does not affect your work, please al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69642857143 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65920911938 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7594881375 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243089529068 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967598882148 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732868496177 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115732687177 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833764411105 0.0580467560999 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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