You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to join because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer:
Explain your situation
Describe your problem
Tell him/her when you can start
I am writing in reference to inform you of my unavailability to join as scheduled next week due to some problems. Let me elucidate further.
As you are aware I am currently based in Delhi and needed to relocate to Bangalore last week as agreed during the interview process however there has been an unexpected delay from the mover. The reason being the unavailability of a cargo truck. Although I am pushing the mover not to delay it any further however looking at the present situation I think it will take some more days. Additionally, there have been a few delays from the landlord on termination of my leasing agreement as I am terminating the lease mid-year and need to forfeit my deposit.
While I am making every effort to join next week however due to some procedural delays it doesn't seem possible. Hence I would request you to delay my joining by another week as I would have sorted out my relocation and leasing agreement issue by then.
I look forward to your response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...owever due to some procedural delays it doesnt seem possible. Hence I would request yo...
Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...cedural delays it doesnt seem possible. Hence I would request you to delay my joining...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ward to your response. Yours sincerely Said
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72924264808 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3096956661 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200504542754 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083367415067 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624477702743 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133242399311 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046798028502 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.