Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food.Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Public health is closely linked to food. Some people say that the government is obliged to legislate on healthy foods. But others believe it is a personal matter and it is up to the individual.I will explain my opinion in the following paragraphs.
The government enacts laws in all parts of the country, including food.This allows food factories to produce food in accordance with these laws and to meet the required standards.As well as restaurants that have a lot to do with health, use great content to cook.And if they ever break the law, they will be treated in accordance with the law. They will realize that health is one of the vital things in the field that cannot be ignored.In 1990, for example, the Food Court's food factory marketed canned foods with synthetic ingredients and poisoned hundreds.As a result, the government was able to close the plant in accordance with the laws issued and to recover damages from the company officials.Or, the government can impose large taxes on harmful food, not only can it reduce store shelves from being available. It also doesn't deprive people of their right to freedom.
On the other hand, it is true that people should be free to choose their own food so that they can choose their favorite food.If the government resorted to force in the choice of food, this would cause people to protest, resulting in chaos in society.Because this is totally contrary to the law of the right to vote for people.In this case, the government should play an informative role so that it can educate the public on the right choice of food using the mass media.
In conclusion,I believe, though, that the government should enact strong food laws. But to avoid social unrest, people must be free to choose food .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86046511628 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58285786948 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.170314758 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.555555556 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262804088312 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113643063718 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483179278328 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165131488432 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372419824124 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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