Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics: Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Regardless the people’s ages, happiness can be probably found in all lifespan. However, it has been claimed that the most delightful times are came at specific age. In my opinion, happiness depends on the attitude, not the age, of each individual.

Life of adult is complicated because it is full of pleasant and difficult times. After graduation, adults find themselves under great pressure due to many responsibilities which are not only looking for a job suiting their qualifications but also paying the bills. Surprisingly, there are some pleasant times in adulthood despite these difficulties. Maturity, which is brought by growing up, is one of the delighted moments due to because it shows that people are well developed emotionally. Furthermore, commonly, they do not worry about either studying or going to school.

In contrast, young people are free from these worries because they are often supported financially from their parents and they have neither obligations nor duties. As a result, they have times for regular exercising in order to maintain good overall health. Yet, hard times not only found in in adulthood but also in young people’s life. Primarily, they aim to enter reputable university so they study hard and spend many hours taking lessons and thus lead them to feel anxious.

In conclusion, although adolescence come with few responsibilities and a great deal of joyful, the key to happiness does not concern a specific generation. Accordingly, I believe that age may not influence happiness whereas it is brought at all the times.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... health. Yet, hard times not only found in in adulthood but also in young people&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02342413075 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4501662297 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130992876632 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468975652335 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444454817836 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070587717554 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410493291113 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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