Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary society, whether teenage years are the best times of life or adulthood brings more happiness has sparked much discussions. Some people assert that teenage life brings more happiness, whereas innumerable think in spite of responsibilities adult life are the happiest times. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.
Convincing arguments can be made that teenage life is more comprehensive and joyful compared to adult life. To start with, teenagers are very energetic and enthusiastic as they grow. They want to explore new things and are generally free from life burdens. Moreover, younger generation prefer travelling with friends, going for parties and making good memories. Secondly, teenagers, especially university students, usually have a great time of their lives during their graduation period. In a recent study, it is proven that university students are more joyous towards life and have a broad thinking compared to the adults. Lastly, teenagers, at most times, do not hesitate to take decisions and always have a positive approach which makes their life happy and healthy.
On the other hand, some people believe adulthood brings more happiness to life. It might be true for some people who never got the chance to live a happy teenage life due to various family muddles and disturbances. However, with greater responsibilities, one cannot live life the way he wants it to be. A person with family is usually stressed because of his family paramount needs. Furthermore, work related factors also affects his happiness towards life. For example, an individual who is always busy and loaded with work often becomes dull and lethargic. He doesn't get time to spend with family and cannot live a serene happier life in comparison with teenagers.
In conclusion, I would concede that adulthood may have some supremacy. Despite that, teenage life supports in a much better way. In my opinion, teenage years are more delightful, calm, beautiful and tension free where individuals are free from life hurdles and responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28267477204 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83543457199 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0243657236 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29291865981 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867039111627 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970862331031 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198054400565 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105996618444 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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