Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness , in Spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both views and gives your own opinions.

Essay topics: Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness , in Spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and gives your own opinions.

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Human life is divided by three stages, childhood,teenage, adult age. Every stage is different from others contains of attitude, responsibility etc. Some people think that teenage time is happier than adult life some think opposite.

Firstly, in adult life people is more sensible, experience and wealthy person. So they can do whatever they want to do. Most of the cases they have family, children, job everything which is the important elements in a happy life. But they have lots of responsibility too.Though they have everything but they have no time to enjoy with friends, no physical condition to go to solo or group trip without any notice or preparation. Now they have enough money to eat anywhere but health condition is not approve them to eat most of the times. They have job, family and lots of thing to maintain rather than enjoying life. For example, CEO of one company,can not plan his or her schedule without thinking of anything but hanging out with friends.

Secondly, in teenage time there is no boundary to live a life. They are overall more healthy, energetic and curious person. Though you have not enough money but you are more compatible in any situation. In this time everyone have enough time and less responsibility to enjoy life with friends and discover many new things. This is the time to challenge everything because they have curious mind to do something new in their own way.One clear example, is that Mark Zuckerberg, who is one the most famous person all over the world nowadays because of his innovation. In teenage he has courage to do some different things to go to out of the box. He did not even complete his education to fulfil his dream project. He lives a life completely different way of traditional form. It is only because he has age to do something deer spirit in life.

Lastly in comparison of both side it is showed that teenage time is more happier than adult life. because in teenage there is freedom, energy and courage.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: jobbed
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79532163743 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64704357942 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5723049874 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0952380952 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208116349991 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716238702126 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860345675087 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164159941619 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765678159231 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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