Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness , in Spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both views and gives your own opinions.

Essay topics: Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness , in Spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and gives your own opinions.

mazeda khatun mitu's picture

Human life is divided into
three stages, childhood, teenage, adult age. Every stage is different from
others contains attitude, responsibility etc. Some people think that teenage
time is happier than adult life some think opposite.

Firstly, in adult
life people is more sensible, experience and wealthy person. So they can do
whatever they want to do. Most of the cases they have a family, children, job everything which is the important elements in
a happy life. But they have lots of responsibility too. Though they have everything,they
have no time to enjoy with friends, no physical condition to go to solo or
group trip without any notice or preparation. Now they have enough money to eat
anywhere, but health condition is not approved them to eat most of the times.
They have a job, family and lots of thing to maintain rather than enjoying
life. For example, CEO of one company, can
not plan his or her schedule without thinking of anything but hanging out with
friends.

Secondly, in
teenage time there is no boundary to live a life. They are a more healthy,
energetic and curious person. Though you have not enough money, you are more
compatible in any situation. In this time everyone has enough time and less responsibility to enjoy life with friends
and discover many new things. This is the
time to challenge everything because they have a curious mind to do something new in their way. One clear example
is that Mark Zuckerberg, who is one the most famous person all over the world
nowadays because of his innovation. In teenage,
he dares to do some different things to
go to out of the box. He did not even complete his education to fulfil his
dream project. He lives a life completely different way of traditional form. It
is because he has age to do something deer spirit in life.

Lastly, in comparison of both side,
it is showed that teenage time is happier than adult life. Because in teenage there is freedom, energy and
courage.

 

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.47236180905 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.80223100963 2.80592935109 242% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 117.722597661 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.8 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.38176352705 730% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113951104889 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385960676073 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429236335355 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449311552741 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651301463273 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.25 12.4159519038 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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