some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment.
<p style="margin-top:0cm;margin-right:0cm;margin-bottom:7.5pt;margin-left:0cm;
line-height:19.8pt"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">In the modern era, everything has so many options than previous
days. People have more options now, where he wants to live house or apartment,
what to eat national or international food. For example,
nowadays some people want to live in an apartment more than a house because
they think it has more advantages than disadvantages. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">Firstly discuss those people who are preferred to live in a
house rather than an apartment. They preferred privacy, and in a house, there is more
privacy than an apartment. House has its
private backyard where people can do own
gardening, decorating what kind they want to do. Sometimes they make their
swimming pool, children playground. When one family have little children and most
of the time they are so loud then its better to live in a house. Because then
they have more space to play and if they are loud then no one will be
disturbed. And in a house backyard, you can pass your evening time with an open space with fresh air, and it will refresh
you for the next day. For some people, it is more valuable than other things.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0cm;margin-right:0cm;margin-bottom:7.5pt;margin-left:0cm;
line-height:19.8pt"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">Secondly, some</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;"> people are
preferred to live in an apartment because there is everything well organised. Most of the apartment nowadays have a luxurious gym, heated swimming pool, common
party space which is maintained by the apartment authority. So you have less
responsibility to maintain an apartment than a house. Nowadays people are busy about
their job, education etc. They have not enough time to maintain a house for
that reason they prefer an apartment. Al
tough apartment has more security system
than a house and the situation of this time which is the most important criteria for the people. An
apartment there are lots of people who live
together one building block, so it is
easier and more convenient for people to socialise
with others. Sometimes next door apartment people are helping each other for their need. For that reason, you can call
an apartment a little society under a big house.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">Discussing both sides
there are no perfect criteria which one is best for living a house or an
apartment. It depends on completely one person choices, needs, situations and preference.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2746.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44600938967 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.11220500772 2.80592935109 253% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.803989291 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.38176352705 753% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258748934322 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110624291097 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106107540875 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10065140687 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107977161715 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.13 12.4159519038 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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