It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others are not, However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both side views an

Essay topics: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others are not, However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both side views and gives own opinion.

mazeda khatun mitu's picture

Most of the time we heart that his or her talents it is God gifted. Generally its true because some people are able to sing good song without any knowledge and training. On the other hand someone is good player without any type of coaching but there are some factor too if someone born with some special certain talents but if he or she does not practise it properly then he will not be a good one because without practise it is impossible to do better in life.

Firstly it is true that some people have by born talent in particular things. we often see that in the street one person is singing a beautiful song with very good voice, but you survey then you find amazing things that they have no professional training or knowledge. Such as there was a good cricketer in Bangladesh team named Rafiq in that time. But most amazing thing is that he had not any training at his childhood to that time because he comes from very needy family. And it is impossible for his family to provide that. But he has by born talent in cricket that is why he got chance the national team of Bangladesh.

Secondly moreover some people are born with special talents but without proper guideline and practise it is difficult, sometimes impossible for anyone to improve her talents. One person can not reach the peak without proper training because he only knows the basic things not the specialised knowledge. on the other hand it is help someone to do well in sports and singing if he have by born talents but motivation and further knowledge is also important. For example, well known footballer Messy was found a talented boy at that time but then one of the club gives him proper coaching and training that will helps him to become a world famous footballer now now a days.

In summary, analysing both side of arguments its clear that although people born with certain talents without training it is difficult to do well but if child have motivation and proper training then he also be a good sports person and musician.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in particular, in summary, such as, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56629834254 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37395060267 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455801104972 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7896621197 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260660907341 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092915960759 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659515276917 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180875907383 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503977229982 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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