some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment.
In the modern era, everything has so many options than previous days. People have more options now, where he wants to live house or apartment, what to eat national or international food. For example now a days some people wants to live an apartment more than a house because they think it has more advantages.
Firstly discuss about those people who is preferred to live in a house rather than an apartment. They preferred privacy and in a house there is more privacy than an apartment. House have its private backyard where people are able to do own gardening, decorating what kind they want to do. Sometimes they make their own swimming pool children play ground. when one family have little children and most of the time they are so loud then its better to live in a house. Because then they have more space to play and if they are loud then no one will be disturbed. And in a house backyard you are able to pass your evening time in a open space with fresh air and it will refreshed you for the next day. For some people it is more valuable than other things.
Secondly some people are preferred to live in an apartment because in there everything are well organised.Most of the apartment now a day have luxurious gym, heated swimming pool, common party space which is maintained by the apartment authority. So you have less responsibility to maintain an apartment than a house. Now a days people are busy about their job, education etc. They have not enough time to maintain a house for that reason they prefer apartment. Al tough apartment have more security system than a house and the situation of this time which is most important criteria for the people. An apartment there are lots of people live together one building block so it is easier and more convenient for people to socialised with others. Sometimes next door apartment people are helps each other for their need. For that reason you can called apartment a little society under a big house.
Discussing both side there are no perfect criteria which one is best for living a house or an apartment. It depends on completely one person choices, needs,situations and preference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69841269841 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55210256714 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449735449735 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7058591184 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360856764202 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12902550447 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117736329631 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263154197293 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065027415616 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.