Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has been thought by some that most people are happy at their teen times, while others argue that life during adolescent period are the happiest besides added responsibilities. Although days during teenage years were happier because of no financial constraints, however, I believe sense of achievements in people’s professional life makes them happier.
On the one hand, teenage life is considered as the joyful period because during that period they are free from financial burden. This is because they have their parents to look after their needs, to pay their tuition fee, and also they do not have any pressure on them to manage the monthly bills. Recent research conducted by the Mental association of India disclosed that 78% of people were in a happy state of mind between the age of 10-20 as their financial needs are satisfied by their parents. However, I believe that the social pressure on them to excel in their education makes their life miserable.
On the other hand, many believe that adult life is regarded as the contended period because they have established and attained a place for themselves at their workplace. That is to say, grown-ups set career goals and strive hard to achieve excellence in their career, when they obtain rewards and promote themselves to a higher level, it brings them immense joy as they create a self-identity. For instance, recent research conducted by the Times Now magazine showed that people aged above 40 consider the moments as part of their professional excellence as the cherished part of their life. This essay completely agrees that adult life allows a person to achieve their goals and also to address the family needs.
To conclude, though the adolescent period allows young boys and girls to stay happy; not worrying about financial needs, I believe that a successful career path makes the men and woman happier in their adulthood.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, while, for instance, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08253968254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6203844592 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3670452948 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.545454545 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115208267705 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053887360276 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475692498133 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804935264008 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072885492453 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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