In today's rapidly changing globalized world, often it has become topic of discussion, whether teenage years of our lives were the happiest time of the life or adult life is better. In this essay, will be discussing both the view, before reaching to a concrete decision.
In the first hand, it is fair to say that the life of a juvenile or a teenager is responsibility free. In the normal circumstances a teenager has only one responsibility and that is study. They are free to spend their time according to their choice. In addition, teenage are free to make any decision which could help them to stable for lifetime. For instance, this is the time when they can decide what field they want to choose as a career and what hobbies they are interested in. Without being in any pressure they can take any risks or could avoid detrimental decision. However, due to modernization and industrialization of the society, teenager are forced to be in pressure as in their complete future is dependent on the decision of these years. The adulthood of the juvenile is dependent on how much serious they are in studies and what field they are going to pursue for studies.
On the other hand, nevertheless, the life of adults are full of responsibility. And despite having myriad of responsibility, an adult are free to do whatever they want to do. Their lives are totally dependent on what they did in their teenage or the decision they took that time. There is not much to do to ameliorate the situation.
In my opinion, both the era of the lives are important. It is upto the person how they are going to take it. It is every individuals responsibility to enjoy the life and make it better for him/herself or for family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ore reaching to a concrete decision. In the first hand, it is fair to say that ...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e or a teenager is responsibility free. In the normal circumstances a teenager has...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... they are going to take it. It is every individuals responsibility to enjoy the life and ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65789473684 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83640388179 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483552631579 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7142782247 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136822671626 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049040094356 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502511587578 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102425012328 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500507809837 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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