Everyone has the happiest time in their life. Most people think that the happiest time in their teens, others believe that adult life can bring more joy, even with great responsibilities.
Aside from the extreme family environment, the reason why people feel happy when they are young. First of all, they are in adolescence, and they are strongly independent and eager to learn. They want to get rid of the supervision of their parents and strive for a sense of group identity. They will gradually establish their own values, or beliefs and a practical goal. Secondly, they can make like-minded friends and be joyful to be recognized by each other in group life. I think that like most people when you accomplish the goals which you set for yourself for the first time, it will become an unforgettable memory.
After growing up as an adult, the shackles of identity will be reduced, and you will become freer than when you were a teenager. Meanwhile, the responsibilities have become relatively large, such as life pressures or family responsibilities. People may find they are happier to be able to decide things for themselves, while others think they’re glad to welcome a new life with a new family member.
In my opinion, having a contrast can highlight while the stage is joyful. As a teenager fell adults live happier when seeing adults living their lives freely. In contrast, when you have experienced a lot of things in adulthood, you will feel happier in your teenage years. However, after a long time in adulthood, there will always be a moment that will become one of the best memories in life once again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86330935252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70907971133 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5577776942 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228081554304 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796287068458 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803710080221 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163210162706 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900145233943 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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