Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive. To what extent do you agree/disagree.

Essay topics: Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive. To what extent do you agree/disagree.

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Recently, a debate triggered where a section of society claims that women are more affable and composed than men, whereas others are not in agreement with it. I agree with it because females play a significant , important and compassionate role in everyone’s life.

To begin with, women are more compassionate and sensitive towards others. They can easily relate to other’s situation. Furthermore, men are weak in exemplifying emotions and care to people around them. And male chauvinism worsens the situation because it may look them weak while expressing the sentiments and feelings. However, women express compassion easily by socializing, bonding with others and nurturance within the society. Today, they play different roles, for example being a mentor of her kids to face the world or she works full time as a breadwinner of the family. Thus, compassionate instinct is the innate trait in them.

For ages, women have been raising and protecting offspring who needed protection while men engaged in herculean tasks of hunting and warfare. Therefore, kindness, gentleness, and warmth have always been associated with females. In addition, men have the tendency of fight or flight in case of stressful situations. However, women embrace hard times with ease and resolve the stress. Therefore, these tendencies confirm that women are affable figures than men.

To conclude, women are cool as a cucumber and have composed attitude to develop and nurture the world around them, when compared to men.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39915966387 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85572746531 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2461526596 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162674050403 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053205685886 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539817440325 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100723637775 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257597943383 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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