Some people think that youngsters should leave their home while others think that it is better to stay at home as far as they can.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Few men and women deem that young people should go away from home whereas some people think that it is better to adapt homely environment, instead of going anywhere. Although, family relationships would be augmented, if adolescents live in home, I believe that, leaving home would make young people more independent.
On the one hand, family bonding with every family member would get stronger, if youth stays at home. That is to say that, family members can spend quality time together as well as can share daily happenings with each other and on top of that, youngsters would also be aware about discipline and family culture. Consequently, this would not only help to upsurge the relationships in positive manner but, family members can also assist each other if any adverse condition arises in family. For example, despite of having a trend of nuclear families in India, family culture between Indians are still well-maintained because youngsters never leave their home. However, I believe that, liberty will play a fruitful role in young people's lives, if they leave their home.
On the other hand, independent life-style would develop youngsters to a greater extent rather than spending time in homely atmosphere. This is because, if adolescents leave their home, then, they will start taking decisions of life themselves which eventually change their vulnerable minds and decision making power will inculcate. As a result, if any egregious situation arises as a repercussion of that decision then, remedy would be found by young people to resolve it, that utterly helps them in adulthood. To illustrate, in The USA, people leave their home at an early age which explicitly makes them more clever and more developed to solve any difficult situation. Hence, it can be substantiated that, leaving home at young age is better as compared to live with family.
In conclusion, though, family relationships can be made healthier, I believe that, go away from home would be proven more beneficial in future due to liberty, people will get and it is recommended that, every youngster should be compelled by family to leave home in order to develop better in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, still, then, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12112676056 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69391225938 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7317843767 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.846153846 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294321945642 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120504761676 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567300939796 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197554983633 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397081458349 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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