Wilde life always being in danger by human action, some people believe that put in rare animals in protected areas like zoos we can save them from extinction, but another thinks that this is brutal to lock animals in a cage, I think both ideas have the advantage and disadvantages.
The first obvious advantage of having a zoo in cities is that people can visit endangered species and learn about them and children can see animals that are very rare, they can study how they live, how they reproduction and raise their children. For example, in many developed countries, the government building a huge protected park look like the actual habitats of animals and put the spices in a simulated area, so animals can live there without any danger from illegal hunters or low supply of food, in addition by keeping rare animals in a protected area like a zoo, scientist can raise them in a laboratory and release them in wildlife like pandas or white tiger.
On the other hand, in some cases, zoos are the place for making money from showing animals to people, they keep animals in terrible conditions and be treated crucially. For instance, in developing countries zoos are a horrible place for animals even people can't stay there for long hours, they keep animals in a small and dirty cage full of insects, or they are beating by a zookeeper so that this is one of the biggest disadvantages from having a zoo in cities.
To sum up, saving rare animals is a very important task on individual and government shoulders, I believe that by keeping them in restricted areas and animal parks we can protect them from hunting or unnatural disasters and save them from extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n wildlife like pandas or white tiger. On the other hand, in some cases, zoos a...
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... horrible place for animals even people cant stay there for long hours, they keep an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74657534247 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52159931914 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.617375459 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 231.0 106.682146367 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167815249966 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104147975735 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066517644082 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122382399519 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772553688994 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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