Some people use technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing a doctor. Why this is so? It is positive or negative development according to you?
Nowadays, people are becoming busy with hectic work schedules, hence, consulting their health problems over telephone and online consultation are becoming a common trend. One of the most important reasons is the long waiting hours in various clinics, where patients need to spend hours to meet their doctors. In the following passage, I will discuss the other implications before sharing my opinion.
Getting a doctor appointment is becoming an intricate task. Some doctors have limited appointment per day; therefore, patients go early to the clinics and wait for hours to meet physicians. For instance, my wife went to meet her doctor and it took 2 hours for her consultation, which could be avoided by online consultation. Additionally, people can save their consultation fees when they opt for telephonic consultation. Moreover, some doctors prescribe unwanted medical tests where some patients felt that some tests are not irrelevant for their medical conditions. Thus, it has been believed that people use technology for their medical problems to save money and time.
On the other side, various fatalities are being reported due to wrong prescription through online consultation. Furthermore, many fake as well as inexperienced medical professional are running various telephonic or online consultations, where improper treatments are given to various diseases. For example, in a news articles suggest that, in Chennai 150 fake doctors who are providing Skype consultation have been caught and arrested. Similarly, Some doctors who provide online consultation gave unwanted as well as unapproved medicines for various patients, which had lead to many deaths.
In conclusion, physical examination would help doctors to identify exact disease, which would save many people's life. Also, in virtue of saving money and time many patients make their life in risk by consulting various unauthorised doctors. In my view, the current trend is a negative development which should be stopped to save many people’s lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55806451613 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95528416138 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7584021748 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21569278237 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074658250905 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682969330612 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121172994222 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840759585764 0.056905535591 148% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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