Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable, people who are all not doing anything to come out from the stress in order to seriousness. While others thinking that we need to do lots of activities our day to day life to relief from stress. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn,
On the other hand, why personages are getting strain, there are several possibilities in this competitive world. First up all, most of the marketing companies fixed their target to their workers to achieve their products or own business person has to run his business to get the margin or IT industry people has to complete their projects with in the deadlines in order to this Homo sapiens are getting strain on their work. Due to this, many companies are offering meditation, yoga training on their own resources. Doctors are suggesting meditation such as breathing exercise, laughter therapy and yoga to get relax from stress. For example, In Germany, most of the people who are all working on IT industries and they are working very hardly to complete their projects and many of them which are feeling stress and consulting with the doctors.
On the one hand, some human species whoever they feel like a stress, they feel very comfort zone because they are very calm and they will not react much. How this will work out?, when generally people are very calm in that case they will get a good and deep sleep so this is automatically we will get relax. For example, One of the survey report which is showing 24% people go to bed at 9 PM and they will go to hypnosis right away, those all are not thinking about their problems. if a person is not doing anything then for sure they will think of the factors/causes of that problems.
To conclude this, my opinion, if we don't do anything with calm one or two time may work but best way to overcome stress need to do Meditation.. Government has to responsible to make sure people health in order to that they can provide free meditation awareness and free yoga centres to motivate all the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61035422343 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48238304286 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520435967302 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5738799149 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119881865836 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570013797411 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757692482222 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971278022192 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658572235228 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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