Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Now a days many students prefer doing part time jobs with their academics, they want to grab these opportunities to lower down the financial burden of their course however, this results in more tedious lifestyle for them. With consideration of pros and cons of this phenomenon i would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
Firstly, the reason which imposes them to work while studying is huge fees that structured by universities or colleges. Students who come from that background where their parents work extremely hard to meet the financial criteria designed by academic organisations, are compel to choose some part time jobs to help their parents. Additionally, sometimes to get fit into the expensive and fancy environment of the place where they study, they work hard to earn extra pocket money. Employment with study helps them in many aspects however, it leads to effect their education sometimes. In addition to it, they are not able to pay full attention to their course modules because working while studying consumes most of their time so they hardly get spare time to study. As well as putting extra effort in both study and work effect mental and physical health which certainly is not helpful for long term prospective.
They key idea which can provide solution to this situation is help from government. State and central government should declare some educational benefits to the needful from the country's budget. Reservation on the basis of cast and creed should be demolished, only reservation which is in help would be on the basis of financial need for study.In addition to this all the universities should secure seats for those students who has scored well in exams but any how can not effort the education because of money. Moreover, if we can see there are plethora of benefits which can be provided to the students, with help of that they won't be forced to waste their precious time in working and will be able to pay their time and attention only to study to nurture their bright future.
With elephant sized drawback, i have come to the conclusion in the end that students work hard to share financial burden of their study, however with the help of government and educational institution this problem can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95275590551 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59785512981 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.36735094 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.153846154 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3076923077 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193436315222 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770962218486 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279043110564 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126935685229 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134226864095 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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