Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter:
give details about the order you made
explain what was wrong with the item
tell the company what you want them to do about it
Hello Sir/ Ma'am,
This is to inform you that last week I had ordered one dress from your e-commerce website. I was overjoyed after ordering that dress however, my all excitement got ruined after my order arrived. Unfortunately, the dress I received is totally different in size according to your given size measurements. Also, there is one hole at the back side of the dress which is externally disappointing.
The order was made on 14th August and order no is 23456. It is a blue colour dress from ZARA. Also,I have attached invoice with this letter for your further reference. I had picked medium size However, the dress I got is seems to be small in size. There is some issue with your size scale provided on website. In addition to this, sending damaged fabric is extremely unprofessional attitude of vendor. Although, I have been your regular customer and brought number of items from your website. This behaviour is not acceptable at yours end.
I would like to say that I really like this dress. And, request you to please initiate the exchange process in this regard. Please exchange this stuff with bigger size and undamaged fabric. In case you won't be able to exchange this I will request for total refund of money. I accept any quick action in this matter as soon as possible.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: different
...nately, the dress I received is totally different in size according to your given size measuremen...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...order was made on 14th August and order no is 23456. It is a blue colour dress fro...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...t is a blue colour dress from ZARA. Also,I have attached invoice with this letter ...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: small
...However, the dress I got is seems to be small in size. There is some issue with your size sca...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exchange this stuff with bigger size and undamaged fabric. In case you wont be ab...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81355932203 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53412503946 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1051482415 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.7894736842 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4210526316 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112941653784 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362227860955 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403730612224 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079445930393 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015329667798 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.