You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable.
Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter:
give details about the order you made
explain what was wrong with the item
tell the company what you want them to do about it
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is in connection with an equipment I purchased recently from your online retail store and the condition in which it was delivered.
During your yearly fall sale which was held between 10th to 15th August, I ordered a multi functional food processor with a set of additional blades. The order was placed on the last day of this sale and the identification number for that is #1249638799 .
Although the order was delivered on time, it was missing an essential part without which its useless. The product description mentioned that the device will come with a set of dettachable blades. Not only were those missing, but you missed out on sending the additional set I ordered along with the complimentory ones.
I request you to please raise this complaint with the logistics team to make sure such errors are avoided in the future. I would also like to receive a replacement at the earilest, provided that its available in red, or else you can refund the entire order amount to my bank account.
Look forward to the new product delivery details
Yours Sincerely
Karishma Dave
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ondition in which it was delivered. During your yearly fall sale which was h...
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...ification number for that is #1249638799 . Although the order was delivered ...
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...cation number for that is #1249638799 . Although the order was delivered on time...
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...ered along with the complimentory ones. I request you to please raise this compl...
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...entire order amount to my bank account. Look forward to the new product delivery...
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...ward to the new product delivery details Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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...livery details Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03743315508 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6780422638 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.4592387849 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205715806171 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782398697872 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347674623797 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999889593008 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426535304506 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.