A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
– Describe your point of view.
– Say what you like about the show and why.
– Ask the newspaper to take some action.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with your compliant against the show called Lucifer on Netflix which is its online viewing platform.
I have been watching this show since it premiered in 2014 and has successfully been running for six seasons. This program is not only loved by many but also watched regularly by its loyal followers. I believe that your complaint against the character depiction and issues with it having unrealistic plot lines is because you have misunderstood the underlining theme.
This TV serial is about the mythical ruler of Hell who is now on Earth in the USA solving crime and catching criminals. The writers have used this character and its growth trajectory to showcase how even the evilest person can turn over a new leaf and become a good human being. The show is about hope which is what I admire in the story and the actors.
I would like you to please re-watch, understand the meaning behind it and then take back your complaint. I would also wish for you to publish a written apology in your paper.
I look forward to your positive revert and a fabulous review of the show in your newspaper
Yours faithfully
Karishma Dave
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...ve misunderstood the underlining theme. This TV serial is about the mythical rul...
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...t I admire in the story and the actors. I would like you to please re-watch, und...
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...sh a written apology in your paper. I look forward to your positive revert an...
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... in your newspaper Yours faithfully Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85436893204 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53264109223 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.6156213686 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218782630705 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785371634504 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466318535639 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112971291385 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364474625624 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.