You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
- say which advertisement you are answering
- describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
- explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with the advertisement regarding a requirement to teach marketing at your esteemed institute, St. James community college.
On my way to work, I picked up this month’s edition of ‘This week in marketing’ magazine, where I stumbled across your advertisement looking for a ‘new-age marketing guru’ to teach the next batch of advertisers. It was smartly placed on the ‘best commercials’ page, as this page is never missed by an industry expert, since it keeps them stay up-to-date. It was also placed strategically next to the article on the new Google advertisement, that went viral and is the talk of the town.
While I was thinking about this position, I was in a fix deciding on the subjects that would be apt for these new generation of students. I have narrowed it down to two very important courses, ‘Digital Marketing in 2020’ and ‘New trends and methods of marketing’. I believe these two will cover all the relevant points to succeed in the industry. These courses will have a mix of classroom training, group projects and practical workshops to give a holistic learning experience.
I strongly believe this position has opened up only for me, and I think I can bring a lot to the table. I have been in this industry for 16 years and have worked with gigantic brands. Additionally, I also have a M.B.A. degree in Marketing and Advertisement from Harvard.
I look forward to your positive revert and hope that I can help shape the minds of the young talent at your institution.
Yours sincerely,
Karishma Dave
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '‘ the best'.
Suggestion: ‘ the best
...vertisers. It was smartly placed on the ‘best commercials’ page, as this page is neve...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...antic brands. Additionally, I also have a M.B.A. degree in Marketing and Advertis...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9667896679 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99356829295 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9918953498 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146746652814 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496431894148 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419384184796 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861611463714 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049518867893 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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