You recently borrowed something from a friend. Unfortunately, the item has become damaged. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
remind your friend that you borrowed something from him/her
explain how the item became damaged
suggest how you can resolve the issue of the damaged item
Hello there,
Hope you are doing well and this letter will find you in good health. I would like to recall you that last month I had borrowed your laptop for some official work. I am informing you with extreme regret that your laptop got damaged last week. It was totally an unfortunate event while, working on that I accidentally spilled some coffee on keyboard. However, laptop was not in a very good health already my carelessness added some more damage. In addition to this, I tried to start it but due to some internal injury it failed to respond.
Apart from this, I have already talked to service centre prior to informing you. You will be glad to know that they have assured that this issue can be resolved. I have sent your laptop for further recovery, and I believe that soon it will be in its original condition. Also, you need not to be worry about all the expenses, I would compensate that. Once again I am expressing my deep sorrow for my deed. Furthermore, I believe that you will understand my situation and will accept my forgiveness.
Yours Faithfully,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
... original condition. Also, you need not to be worry about all the expenses, I would c...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pt my forgiveness. Yours Faithfully, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, well, while, apart from, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63212435233 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49306267194 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2619614786 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200910203927 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073158573599 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569174544951 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149127527206 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285313872922 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.