Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Number of migrations from the countryside to cities is increasing lately. People are finding the services and facilities in the city easier than in villages, especially the new generation. Moving from rural to a developed place and keeping the old people may cause problems, but there is a solution need to be followed to solve such issue.
Old people were born and stick to their land, while young prefer a new challenge and move toward the cities, but this will lead to problems. First, the number of youngsters will decrease and leads to decline in number of workers some sectors such as farms and agriculture, since boys want to study new majors and follow their thoughts. Second, freedom, social life in cities, isn’t the same as in the countryside, friends can hangout anytime, they can develop and improve their studies, addition to build their modern future. For example, in my country many villages are empty during winter, you can find only old people, because young man/ woman moved towards cities to study, work and to meet their daily needs.
On the other hand, the government should play the main role to develop the countryside, this way will encourage young man/woman to stay, by offering several facilities that change their lives positively. First, the government must develop several sectors, which might be suitable with the living in countryside, such as tourist if there are archaeological sites, by developing it, where it brings many opportunities and aid economically. Second, develop the transportation connection between the countryside and the cities, people can move freely, and trades will increase without any difficulties. For example, China have the most developed transportation network all over the world, trades are moved quickly between states and this help to develop rural areas.
As a conclusion, young people are migrating toward cities due to lack of employment, where old people are stick in their towns. This situation leads to an empty countryside; the solution comes from the government by assisting in dealing with this situation, and following certain developing strategies, to encourage young people to stay and work in their hometowns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 619, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (China) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27556818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74461813719 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3505739348 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.846153846 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257191604769 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979512084549 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532204182902 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172886084169 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539427994758 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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