Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
In recent years an increasingly large number of adults are abandoning their villages and migrating to urban and suburban areas; as a result, countryside is inhabited by only the elderly. While this situation can produce several negative impacts on the society, there are numerous measures to combat this issue.
To begin with, the migration of teenagers and adults has resulted in two major problems. Firstly, due to the lack of young manpower, many aged people are dying for not being able to rich at hospital on time. If sons and daughters of those disable parents were there, none of them had to die untimely since their children would take them to nearby hospital. Secondly, there has been a significant reduction in the agricultural production. This is because there is virtually no manpower to work in the farm to cultivate and harvest resulting in the decline in the crop production. For example, based on the statement of Department of Home Affairs of India, the agricultural productivity of India has reduced by two-thirds as compared to the productivity they achieved in 2005. The report claims that such dramatic decline is directly linked with the migration rate.
Nonetheless, several methods can be employed to alleviate this issue. The governments should at first make an effort to build the infrastructure of rural areas. It is true that a large majority of people migrate to towns and cities to improve their living standard as all the necessary infrastructures are available in urban areas. Therefore, construction of road, cinema hall, shopping markets, availability of telecommunication, and TV channels in countryside would definitely control the rate of migration. Furthermore, governments should also formulate some policies regarding the way to increase the annual income of farmers. In addition to infrastructure, opportunity to generate enough money from agriculture would also motivate the youngsters to continue living in their place.
In conclusion, because of migration of young people from villages, many old people are dying untimely as there is no one to take them to hospital; moreover, it has also negatively impacted on the crop production. Nevertheless, with the establishment of infrastructure and rise in the annual salary of farmers, migration can be effectively reduced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37534246575 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12050344539 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.11781137 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.411764706 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5294117647 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16682057802 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477507048302 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507549744631 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106246649809 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315806626635 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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