Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
In the recent years due to the rapid advances in science and technology, most of the revel companies are releasing new products every year; as a result, some persons are involved in changing their phones, notebooks, and other devices after the new products are widely available. From my perspective, buying updates of such product have several demerits.
To begin with, the primary disadvantage such behavior could imbalance the budget that would be required for other important family purposes. It is true that family need lot of money for kids’ education, health insurance of all members, accommodation costs and several others unavoidable necessities. Therefore, wasting money on buying the latest model can produce a shortfall in family budget. In fact, there would not be any significant differences in performance between the preceding and latest version. For example, it is very hard to distinguish between Samsung S9 and Samsung S10 smartphones.
Furthermore, a person who enjoying purchasing the latest version can eventually become isolated person. This is because his colleagues and relatives can feel inferior to him resulting in the creation of distance between them. Consequently, being isolated from the social group can force him to have several mental illness. Therefore, a person should be careful while buying new product and should consider that whether they are attaining it because of necessity or just for fun.
In conclusion, people can buy new products, but that needs to be determined by the necessities. People spending a large sum of money on those newly arrived products just to attract the attention of others can lead them to isolation and ultimately leading to depression. It is also important that while buying things one should not overlook the family essential requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87487283431 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5324708702 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110405148886 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380162822644 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427688291181 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724351252752 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447585300932 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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