You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.
In your letter, you should:
describe what the course is
explain how it will benefit to the company
suggest how to arrange time for it.
Dear Mr. Mike Green,
I am writing this letter to request you a permission to join a course about the finite element analysis using a recently developed software known as Abaqus. The Abaqus is very powerful software that is mainly developed to assess the crack tip plastic field especially on metallic materials such as Aluminum.
I found that this software can be very important in our work. Firstly, since we are working on fracture mechanic of Aluminum material, we can employ this software to analyse the crack tip plastic stress field which is a very critical parameter of fracture mechanics. As you know that the software that we are using now has no ability to simulate crack tip plastic field, adopting Abaqus would certainly facilitate our investigation on fracture in Aluminum. Secondly, the data processing of the software is tenfold faster than our current software; thus we can save lot of time.
The course is on every Friday for three month. Therefore, I would need holiday on each Friday for three consecutive months.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely,
Dr AR. Agrawal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Mike Green, I am writing this letter to request you ...
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Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...The course is on every Friday for three month. Therefore, I would need holiday on eac...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07936507937 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63530308947 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613756613757 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.739540961 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117260352216 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536048323042 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045990713889 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511394394797 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316867052383 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.