Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the recent years consumer products have become an integral part of human lives. While there are certain demerits of commercial goods, the cons of them comfortably outnumbers the disadvantages.
To begin with, there are two negative concerns of embracing commercially available things. The primary problem is associated with human health resulting from the overuse of edible products such as fast food. It is well known that such food comprises of a large quantity of sugar and fat, consuming such things frequently can lead to develop diseases such as heart attack and diabetes. The other issue is related to the lower productivity of employers and students. This situation usually comes from the frequent uses of electronic devices such as smartphone. For example, in the recent report issued by the Department of US Home Affairs, students in colleges without using any touch screen phone attained incredibly higher degrees than their counterparts who use them continuously.
Nonetheless, there are several benefits that have helped become human lives more comfortable. Firstly, the availability of processed food has tremendously saved both female and male employees time; as a result, they are enabled to spend their time completely in their work. Secondly, advances in communication systems have played a crucial role in controlling the business from anywhere in the world. For instance, an english teacher can use the service provided by Skype and conduct online classes for all the interested student throughout the globe.
In conclusion, while there are certain detrimental effects of consumer services and products, we human are mostly benefited from it. If we are able to use them properly, our lives undoubtedly becomes easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
In the recent years consumer products have become an integr...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...t food. It is well known that such food comprises of a large quantity of sugar and fat, cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43382352941 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84054881327 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665441176471 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.796623937 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102649371856 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384113040393 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614861494044 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778071551162 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515460653114 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.