In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening?
What measures can be taken to stop it?
In recent years the life's quality has been significantly declined, especially in big towns. From my perspective, an increase in the office work pressure has played a vital role in degrading the health of workers. Nonetheless, there are effective measures available to tackle this emerging issue.
To begin with, the working environment of all organizations has become increasingly challenging.
Because the number of rival institutions are established throughout the world, it is very difficult to run one's business without becoming competitive. This has put huge pressure on all working staff to accomplish the projected work on time and help their company survive. As a result, workers are working day and night in order to furnish the work; however, this has significantly reduced their quality of life, that is to say, they do not have adequate time for recreational leisure activities.
Nevertheless, measures are available to raise the quality of workers' lives. Firstly, stricter rules need to be legislated regarding the working time of employers so that all employees working at different companies do not need to stay at office after formal working hours. If this happens, they can go home on time, relax with their family members and have a sound sleep. Furthermore, both employees and employers need to be made aware about the negative consequences of living poor quality life on their health. This can be done through seminars or through the TV advertisement showing degradation of health as a result of lack of time for entertainment.
In conclusion, because of tougher working circumstances in the office, people are having little time to spend for themselves. In order to make citizens live quality life, working hours should be strictly limited; moreover, awareness about the importance of healthy life should be done via television or seminars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the world, it is very difficult to run ones business without becoming competitive. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3277027027 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9917023671 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0936332245 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153392638177 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568850821467 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423036218283 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807179150429 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469989665561 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.