You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.In your letter, you should: give details of book say why you need this book tell how you will

Essay topics:

You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.

In your letter, you should:

give details of book

say why you need this book

tell how you will pay for it.

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is PK Rawal and I am writing this letter to order a book known as A Non-linaer Fracture Mechanics authored by Dr. Ram Sharma. Despite I tried to find it nearby bookstores, none of them are selling this. Fortunately, I came to know from one of my coworkers that you are the only one retailer of this book in our whole town.

That book is very important to me as it has all the essential theories about the fundamental fracture mechanics of both polymers and metallic materials. Even though there are several books on fracture mechanics, they either describe metallic materials or just polymer unlike this very book.

Since your store does not have facility for buying online, it would be better for me to transfer money into your bank account. Please call me at +235736477897 and let me know your bank account number; thereafter, I could immediately transfer the total sum including the cost of courier service. My postal address is attached with this letter so please kindly find it out. Courier charge

I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Kind regards,

Dr. PK Rawal

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lease kindly find it out. Courier charge I look forward to hearing from you as so...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85051546392 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58847072189 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9110708326 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196929372599 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679852388355 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561167487741 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12200939471 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573817709902 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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