These days, many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, the preferences of people to eat fast-food in convenient stores or in restaurant rather than eating in their home can be seen worldwide. While there are certain demerits of it, I, however, believe that it offers numerous benefits to people.
To begin with, the contents of ready to have food can negatively impact on our health. It is undeniable that in order to make food more tempting and increase the number of consumers, the food producing companies deliberately add several chemical components. Consequently, such artificial additives can have detrimental effect on our body resulting in several dangerous diseases such as diabetes, heart attack, etc. Therefore, one should consider the label of the contents before eating it.
Nonetheless, processed food have brought various advantages to human. Firstly, it has helped individuals save time which is the most important thing in this competitive modern era. For example, getting job and retaining it is very challenging, and it would be only possible if one worked industriously at office and at home. Therefore, there is hardly any time left to cook and eat. Nonetheless, easy availability of fast-food has helped them to concentrate at work and use their time solely on work. Furthermore, food satisfaction has also become very essential part of human life. Companies from all over the word manufacture a wide range of food and export them world widely; thereby, people willing to try internationally produced food which have a distinctive taste can easily buy and quench their desire of eating different kinds of food.
In conclusion, even though there is possibility of additives in fast-food that can affect our health, such food has become boon to all of us, especially to the employees for whom time has become the most significant factor. Furthermore, people are getting opportunity to try out verities of food that have distinguishable taste.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...tial part of human life. Companies from all over the word manufacture a wide range of food and ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27687296417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9818351769 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8816209102 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272567063446 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871875246194 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764457883112 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167645357949 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491622381353 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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