You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.In your letter, you should: give details of book say why you need this book tell how you will

Essay topics:

You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.

In your letter, you should:

give details of book

say why you need this book

tell how you will pay for it.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to order a book from your store, which is sold only at your shop in our town. I came to know about it from one of my coworkers, who bought it last week from your bookshop.

The name of the book is A Non-Linear Fracture Mechanics, which has just arrived in markets after its third revision. There are two authors and one of them is Dr. Ram Sharma.

That book is very important to me as it has all the essential theories about the fundamental fracture mechanics of both polymers and metallic materials. Even though there are several books on fracture mechanics, they either describe metallic materials or just polymer unlike this very book.

Regarding the payment system, I would be glad to transfer the required amount into your bank account. Therefore, you could call me at this number (+78536873685368) and provide me your bank account number so that I could transfer it by tomorrow evening.

I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Kind regards,

Dr. PK Rawal

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, therefore, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82122905028 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57026957661 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4337730122 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196800015149 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639841420406 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558752674691 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986948551738 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380476331383 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.