Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?
The recent years have seen several ordinary people who have been popularized by the TV and the Internet. While a few people consider this as a negative development, a majority deem it as a positive change for the whole human race.
To begin with, looking ordinary people in TV shows and Youtube channels, many normal citizens are motivated to expose their talents via such media. On the one hand, people who got this opportunity are encouraged more to refine their god gifted skills, on the other hand, audience is inspired by their performances and are looking forward to exhibit their own hidden talents. For instance, many aspiring singers and stage performers are eager to expose their hidden abilities after watching several performers’ performance in America Got Talents.
Furthermore, after being popular both in nation and international levels, ordinary people are also getting an ample opportunity to earn money. In fact, before their talent was known, most of them had been living a low standard life; however, after grasping the opportunity provided either by TV programs or by Online-based channels, they have been demanded for stage shows nationally and internationally, which in turn has helped them improve their financial status remarkably. For instance, John Abhram, who won the first price of Americal Got Talents for showing his unprecedented magic shows, is now called in almost every international shows; thereby, he has become millionaire just in a short span of time.
In conclusion, the opportunities that have been provided by television and online channels have helped ordinary citizen not only for making famous but also boosting their economic conditions. Moreover, such broadcasts are inspiring aspiring singers, actors, magicians and so on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to exhibiting'.
Suggestion: to exhibiting
...ir performances and are looking forward to exhibit their own hidden talents. For instance,...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g singers, actors, magicians and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39784946237 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87983408009 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8713818383 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.6 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176881978251 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769389934796 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727696939949 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13005917106 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091139963726 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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