Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
While some people consider god gifted talent is extremely essential to be a renowned player, others deem endeavor and everyday practice are more important elements to succeed in any sports. I, however, believe that both are equally indispensable for all aspiring athletes.
There is no doubt that God gifted talent is a crucial component for individual to develop a career in game. It is because all games have different sorts of skills, and only genius and smart person can understand it. Messi, for instance, by birth is an intelligent person enabling him to learn all kinds of talents that would require in playing football in addition to the creation of innovative passing and handling skills. Even though hundreds of kids joined the same academy with him, they could not evolve like which is because they lacked natural ability.
On the other hand, some persons think continuous effort is a key factor to be the best player. It is true that no player has ever won any major tile without practicing continually for many years. For example, Djokovich, who is ranked as number one male tennis player last year, has clearly mentioned in his autobiography about the secret of his incredible achievement, which is directly linked with his persistent industrious efforts. Therefore, it can be inferred from his book that the best way to have a bright career in sport is to devote one’s time and energy in learning and developing techniques that would challenge the opponent.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the divided opinion of people, I presume that both rigorously working attitude and natural capability are vital for all young people to become a challenging person in all sports.
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Suggestion:
...ndispensable for all aspiring athletes. There is no doubt that God gifted talent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11870503597 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73192854403 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654676258993 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0786064871 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131129791617 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049881751247 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453850062396 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859727828286 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041860928319 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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