Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?
It is debatable whether the legislation for maximum age limit is required or not. While some people think this limit must be the age 60, I, however, believe that there must not be any law regulating the retiring age for working.
Firstly, people's horizons of experience, knowledge, and expertise keep extending in a proportion to the age and this is beneficial to our society. For example, a university professor accumulate abundant of priceless information on his subject throughout his career; therefore, both students and his junior coworkers can enhance their knowledge under his supervision comparatively in a short amount of time. Therefore, professionals such as doctors, engineers, professors, and managers should be allowed to work without any age limit.
Secondly, this also reduces the burden of the government. It is primarily because the government does not need to pay the pension of the retired personnel by allowing them to work until they desire to quit the job. This allow the government to allocate that funding in other sectors such as investment in healthcare system. Furthermore, the recruitment of new government staff can be also delayed, which also helps them to save huge amount of money; otherwise, budget would inevitable not only for recruitment process but also for the new members’ traning. For example, recently India recruited 100,000 new staff for replacing the pensioners, which cost them over 5 million dollars.
In conclusion, there should not be any maximum age limit for working as abundant experience and expertise can be used for the betterment of our society; moreover, it helps to lower the financial burden of the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30711610487 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96271963586 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8888704564 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128210236805 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538107467336 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585394615329 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870765488851 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564482127558 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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