Some young people leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to resolve this situation?
Nowadays, it is widely observed that youths are moving to big cities from rural areas, leaving the adults alone. This essay will focus on the vital reasons for this movement and suggest viable solutions to rectify this issue.
A city is an area, in which a great number of people live close together, where job seekers could easily find opportunities over the countryside. In cities, there are numbers of hotels and other industries such as banks, harbour, airport and markets, hence Cities demand for more workers and professional because of the availabilities of the vacant positions. Therefore, there are more jobs opportunities in the cities than in other parts of the country. Besides, all major and affluent universities are located in or nearby a town, hence, teenagers after finishing their secondary education, are shifting to cities from the home towns to continue the education and subsequently, they could easily secure a job in the job market rather than going back to the native place. Despite there are many disadvantages, like traffic congestion, unhealthy life, of living in cities, people like to live in the capitals because guaranteed work.
To mitigate this problem, the government or the authority of the local areas, should develop the rural areas into towns, facilitate them same as cities and create more job opportunities in rural areas where people can continue to live in their home while doing the jobs. For example, the authorities should encourage and help the families to uplift the rural economy by granting loans and technical advice to farmers. By doing so, more job will automatically be created. Therefore, the increasing trend towards cities from villages could be controlled.
In summary, less job market in the countryside and the minimal government support to the villagers are the main problems for the youths to consider for city life. This can be resolved by balancing the economic development and the employment market between the major cities and remote regions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72218846871 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.913820877 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214182652935 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731302324058 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524977913848 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134389036333 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253450919765 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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