Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural background living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?
A number of people believe that countries with multicultural background evolve rapidly than with the same cultural background. In my opinion, I do concur with this thought because diversity brings admirable plans for the country’s development.
In order for a country to accelerate the development, it needs good ideas, better plan and workable solutions for the problems. However, these can be better achieved if people share their knowledge and work together. Individuals from different nationalities and cultural background work with more understanding manner, respect for cultural differences and with increased creative and innovative solutions, indeed, better service for the country. For example, an expatriate team of engineers can design and construct a better transport system such as roads, metro and etcetera. Hence, multiethnic brings numerous advantages to the country they live or work. This will help the economy to grow rapidly.
In addition, a multicultural workforce can boost international business to thrive because of their native language skills, cultural understanding. For example, a multicultural staff of a company can connect to the customers from his local place to bring new business to the company thereby increasing the revenue. To support this, researches have shown that diverse companies were shown to be 35% more likely to have financial return above the national industry median. On the other hand, multicultural business environment attracts more customers locally too. Therefore, diversity is good for business development.
In conclusion, people from various ethnic groups help for the development of the country in comparison with other local society. Accordingly, I concur that multicultural countries grow faster than the same cultural background.
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accordingly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8679245283 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10416296233 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9575602343 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249168458265 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828802157375 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826116814299 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182054722024 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937831306375 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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