In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In this contemporary society, it is widely accepted that a great deal of people in the world have been lacked food although agriculture is witnessing the flourishing developments. While such phenomenon is liable to give rise to several thorny issues, they could be counterbalanced by a number of appropriate remedies.
The shortage of food is widely believed to include the significant growth in population and the harsh weather condition. Residents today in countryside, especially in developing countries, still argue that they would be treated more adequately providing that they have more children. Therefore, they strive to give birth as many as they can although the possible to bring them up is beyond their ability of finance. Moreover, the problem is complicated by the extreme weather in some places where the usual agricultural equipment is incongruous. A case in point is the Sahara’s nature pose a dilemma for inhabitants as there is scarcity of species which is could be used as food can survive. Providing that they want to cultivate, they need particular tools or proper machinery.
There are several actions that could be performed to alleviate the foregoing problems. One measure for the government at those particular places with harsh weather condition to plan an effective strategy to attract private companies to invest in their country because they could expend on expensive machinery that is appropriate for the extreme environment. The second solution should be to convey the leftover food from numerous restaurants, which is widely known as having wasted a great deal of food. Finally, international organizations should provide financial and physical support to areas suffering from hunger.
In conclusion, the improvement of agriculture might not have significant effects on people who go hungry, there appear to be several solutions to diminish the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45762711864 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05385915378 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3050149398 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127873667182 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429346533888 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258158948347 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799965980823 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135474853547 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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