Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while
they are still in prison.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As per research, the data shows that the rate of crime is lower among the people who have educational qualification. So, in order to curtail crime rate it is thought by some people that the ideal way is to educate felonies while they are still in felon. I completely agree with this opinion because an education not only increases their chances of better career opportunities but provides them a chance to become good human being also.
To begin, as a matter of fact that an education degrees open the doors of various future opportunities. This is because of the fact that, if criminals pursue any educational degrees while undergoing through their punishment, they will get better employment after releasing from prison. This would make it possible for them to earn enough money to satisfy their financial requirements. Ultimately, they may not engage in any criminal activities, and the rate of crime will be automatically reduced. For an example, as per article published in the Times of India, owing to initiatives of the government of Gujarat to educate culprits during their imprisonment, the majority of criminals get better jobs in corporates which keeps them away from any criminal activities.
Additionally, it is a fact that an education inculcates morals and values of live. Therefore, by providing education to law-breakers while they are in prison makes them aware about the real meaning of living life and how their engagement in crime will deteriorate not only them but their future generation also in long run. Even as per the psychological reports it is proven that engagement in any educational activities is a good brain
storming exercise which makes drastically change in behavior. Resultantly, an education degree provides opportunity to criminals to become good human beings.
In conclusion, it is an universal fact that the crime rates are lower in educated people. I completely agree with the opinion of some people that the best way to curb crime rate is providing education while felonies are still in lock-ups as it provides them to go ahead with bright future and makes a part of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88803866784 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502857142857 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5226333217 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353738613165 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1396691771 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906313832901 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214726683666 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101369754944 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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