Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?
In recently years, advertisement seems to be a trend for the seals and marketing of products. Many big-brand such as Apple or Cocacola would like to launching a series of magnificent advertisements on TV. Personally speaking, a good story in ads may give products a soul. Moreover, in my opinion, ads has more positive influence to the society. This essay will give a reasonable discussion.
Primarily, to respond the first question, a good story is necessary to ads. And it’s more effective to arouse the curiosity of the potential consumers. Therefore, they will keep the product or the brand in their minds. they will probably switch to the loyal users as time goes by.
Secondly, a delicate ad just like a good movie. it has the artistic value. Furthermore, some sociologists will treat it as a research direction. On the other hand, ad can improve the seals of products which means the incoming of tax will increased. If the development of manufactory goes well, the unemployment rate will be declined. The burden of governments will be released. Companies will have more motivative power on innovation.
Finally, there are huge proportion of artists can not make money by selling their painting or photographs expect cooperating with a brand in an ad film. it means that ads help the society to save the artists before they becoming great masters.
In conclusion, an effective ad must have a good story, so that people can mark the product in their brains. The value of ads should not be ignored on account of it has the ability to driving our society to more prosperous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92936802974 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90010004741 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0146083896 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.3 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.45 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148038502849 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039680870943 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345508493395 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821267358314 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030463494289 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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