In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.
Nowadays, gap year seems to be a trend to this generation. most of students decide to travel abroad for a long time when they graduated the collage. Every coin has two sides, gap year also has both positive and negative effects.
On the one hand, the gap year can be a expensive experience in their childhood. firstly, these young people will meet various of strangers in this tour. However, some of them may meet their best friend ever. For instance, I have met my best friend Eric when I was in my working holiday trip in Australia. secondly, the gap year can open their horizon. it is said that you can learn more by travelling a thousand miles than by reading a thousand books. There are too many knowledges which textbooks and teachers could not tell you. For instance, the traditional culture of different countries.
On the other hand, gap year also has some disadvantages. firstly, it’s very dangerous. most of young students didn’t have enough experiences of driving. Therefore, when they meet the traffic accident in other country, it’s hard to handle that by themselves. Moreover, their parents will extremely worried about them. secondly, they will spend a huge number of money on this trip. On account of prices in some developed countries is very high. it will be a burden to their families. Unless they can find a job in that country.
In conclusion, the gap year is a double-edged sword to young people. If one has decided to go abroad for working holiday, he should better to discuss with his parents first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84528301887 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62958494465 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5985336074 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.3636363636 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0454545455 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208224657554 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053112857537 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048346648976 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130501093209 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350149251752 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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