Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?
Advertising is emerging as connecting medium between larger manufacturer and people around the world. Large organizations are using advertising to promote their product and to earn high sales from it. They use different strategies to make their advertisement effective and become popular in public. I believe it is a good thing for society when such organizations advertise their product around the world.
To begin with, first and foremost way of making advertisement more effective is creativity. They publish advertisement in such a manner that make people entertain and curious to know next steps throughout it. As a result, people are become more interested and indulge them to buy products.
Secondly, big firms always use famous celebrities to promote their product in advertisement. Most people follow the lifestyle of their role model in real life. Thus, if people find their favorite actor to promote different items, they also prefer the same in their routine life. For example, in my country India,people are big fan of Salman Khan. So, whenever he promotes any product, people blindly follow him and purchase that item for their daily routine.
Moreover, such advertisements are also benefited to society in many ways. People come to know about all features and can compare it with other companies' product to purchase best for them. In addition, some advertisement promotes not only usefulness of their product but also elaborate extra benefits one can get from it. For example, in tooth paste advertisement, apart from making strong teeth, it also explains that product can also prevent you from some teeth related disease while using it for longer time.
To conclude, it is obvious that by using advertisements, large companies enhance their sales and society also gets maximum benefits of it.
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Suggestion: celebrities
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Suggestion: companies'; company's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30795847751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81343606087 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0764414323 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256254098313 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915607778912 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687769726553 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15418746534 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081803339764 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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