Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Due to advancement in technology, people are living more and more comfortable and luxurious life. At the same time, different nations around the world are combating with not only environment but also with over population and education. Some people believe that they have to face serious disaster due to such problem in coming ten years. The following essay will outline the problems and its solutions.
To begin with, in coming years, due to over growing population in countries will not only increase burden on education system but also create job scarcity in market. As a result, highly educated people should do odd jobs to earn money. For example, in Australia, due to lack of employment, highly qualified people are doing menial jobs for survival.
Moreover, with growth of population and lack of job opportunities, people are redirect to way of crime to earn money. Anti-social activities such as theft, rapping and kidnapping will become common in big cities. For example, in countries like India and China, because of high population, governments are unbale to cater basic needs of people hence crime activities are more likely to happen now and then in such countries.
As a solving part, government should expand universities or create new. Thus, it can educate a greater number of students. Also, government should boost more industries to provide employment in country. As a result, a higher number of people get employed and encourage others to study more. They should create a strict law to control anti-social activities, that ensure people to live in safe environment.
To conclude, governments of different countries should shake their hands to fight with problem that create disaster for human beings.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20863309353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74563894243 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5798244059 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152357888937 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503790889888 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525281878142 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875116948395 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532329447085 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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